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Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Post by Jabdah » Sat Aug 09, 2014 6:18 am

Keepers Rulebook p. 117, picture text, "ganster" should be "gangster"
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Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Post by Stressed Chef » Sat Aug 09, 2014 7:07 am

Inv Hbk 129 - page ref at end of Ratched's Children section is still a placeholder @@; at top Para of second column there is an errant comma.

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Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Post by Stressed Chef » Sat Aug 09, 2014 7:16 am

Inv Hbk p140 and 141 - Resurrectionists is misspelled throughout.

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Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Post by Stressed Chef » Sat Aug 09, 2014 7:26 am

Inv Hbk p155 -weird kerning on 'carry' in Automobiles section.

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Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Post by Stressed Chef » Sat Aug 09, 2014 7:46 am

Inv Hbk p164 - last Para before 'A Grand Party' switches to present tense when the rest of the section is in the past tense. Same problem recurs in the final sentence on the page.
Also on 164, the 'Life' cover image seems low-res.
On 165 - in the final paragraph of the Technology section there are several uses of 'stores' when 'stories' is meant.

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Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Post by Lionel de Lion » Sat Aug 09, 2014 9:21 am

Investigator's Handbook, page 6

"Cover illustration by Sam Lamont." appears twice (once in each column, almost adjacent to each other)

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Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Post by Lionel de Lion » Sat Aug 09, 2014 9:21 am

Investigator's Handbook, page 47 (Example of Investigator Creation), column 1, paragraph 6

84 (Harvey's EDU) divided by two is 42, not 41.

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Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Post by Stressed Chef » Sat Aug 09, 2014 9:35 am

Inv Hbk p 167 - Amundsen's name is misspelled at the top of the second column. In 1929 entry 'The' need not be capitalised in the St Valentine's Day Massacre.

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Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Post by Stressed Chef » Sat Aug 09, 2014 9:56 am

Inv Hbk p172 - missing full stop at end of autopsy section. Page reference in the first Outfitting paragraph is still a placeholder '@@'.

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Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Post by groovyclam » Sat Aug 09, 2014 12:28 pm

Investigator Handbook - lots of graphics and tables throughout the book have a hard-edged, lighter-colour, rectangular highlight on top of them.

There are lots throughout the whole book but some examples are:

Page 64 - "4 box"
Page 65 - "6 box"

Page 54 - period names table ( compare to same on page 55 )

Page 48 - Harvey's story callout box

Page 38 - eyeball graphic

And on and on and on...
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