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Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Post by Magnus Nordlander » Mon Aug 18, 2014 12:25 am

Keeper's rulebook, page 285: Inconsistent capitalization. Sometimes colour is spelled with a lower-case c, sometimes with upper-case, without any consistency.
Keeper's rulebook, page 285: "Base amount, which then increases as a color feeds". Color should be colour, because it refers to a colour out of space.

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Post by Omnilord » Mon Aug 18, 2014 2:01 am

Investigator Handbook - page 128. This might be intentional:
Novem Angelus is missing 'Suggested investigator professions'

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Post by Omnilord » Mon Aug 18, 2014 2:53 am

Keeper's rulebook - page 226. Book Of Eibon.
'Study: 32' is missing weeks, should be 'Study: 32 weeks'

Keeper's rulebook - page 227 & 229 uses 'weeks to study' instead of weeks for the following entries:
Cthaat Aquadingen
Cultes des Goules
The King in Yellow
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Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Post by Delthos » Mon Aug 18, 2014 3:00 am

Keeper's Handbook
page 161 and 162. Tables IX and X have inconsistent font size. Table IX looks to be 12 point and Table X looks to be 10 point. It wouldn't be bad but they are facing pages and is very noticeable.

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Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Post by SDLeary » Mon Aug 18, 2014 6:31 am

There seems to be an incongruity between the Automatic Fire rules on p.116 and the summary on p.410.

p.116 suggests that all rounds in the first volley hit intended target on a a regular success, and this seems supported by the example on the same page.

p.410 states that half the rounds from the first volley hit the intended target on a regular success.

as an aside... I'm sure that the Military wishes they had riflemen that landed that many rounds when rocking and rolling.

Steven D. Leary

EDIT-- Whoops, sorry. This is in the Keepers book.
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Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Post by Titus Priam » Mon Aug 18, 2014 4:02 pm

86 Pharmacis
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92 zookeeper
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Keepers book
116 example - Harvey can’t roll 01 and 00 with penalty dice. It could be 01, 11, 21, up to 91 or 10, 20, 30 up to 100. Harvey can't crit as he has to take the worst result on the penalty dice, unless I have miss a rule for crit on 01.
226 book of eibon english – weeks missing after 32 (study)

Chapter 14
Both HP: and Hit Points: used for monsters, you should double check. HP: intented I believe.
283 Byakhee - Hit Points:
287 Dagon & Hydra - HP missing ":" = HP: and should be bold. Should also be in the next line If you can find space. Stats have other layout than other monsters
287 Dark Young - Hit Points:
288 Deep One - Hit Points:
300 Lloigor - (HP :) and (Average damage bonus) should not have "(" and ")"
306 Shoggoth - Hit Points:
Deities of the Mythos - it's seems strange that HP is part of stats for Deities, when it was on it own line for monsters

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Post by Titus Priam » Tue Aug 19, 2014 8:22 am

Keepers book

226 the book of eibon - all books under spells: "Formless Spawn of Zhothaqquah (Tsathoggua)" should be "Formless Spawn of Zhothaqquah (Formless Spawn)"

328-329 Ubbo-Sathla and spawn of ubbo-sathla - armor: should it be "immune to impale, projectile and cutting weapons" for both deity and spawn? Shouldn't spawn be placed under monster like formless-spawn?

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Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Post by AstralWanderer » Tue Aug 19, 2014 11:57 am

Keeper's Guide page 229 - Bibliothèque Nationale should be spelt with a grave (è) not an acute (é).

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Post by Jaws67 » Tue Aug 19, 2014 10:53 pm

Keepers Book: Page 83 under the heading 'Rolling the Dice: Success or Failure' the word Graduation should be Gradation.

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Post by SDLeary » Wed Aug 20, 2014 12:07 am

Keepers Book, p.176

Excess space. Pagination issue, or possibly missing graphic. Just above Using Magic.

Same page. Space between end of Using Magic and Learning Spells. Excess space.

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