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Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2014 11:46 pm
by Keeper Dan
Did you find a typo in the proof provided by Chaosium? Then share it here so they can fix it for the final print!

Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2014 11:57 pm
by Zarozinia
On the contents page on page 8 of the Investigator's Handbook, 'The Dunwich Horror' is spelt 'The Dunwitch Horror.'

Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2014 12:15 am
by bowman
On page 45, in the entry on Intelligence, using INT as the Idea roll is mentioned twice.

And the continued on page 44 note at the end of the page should be to page 48. And that entry for Luck is awfully short. Not sure if there's missing text here.

Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2014 12:31 am
by bowman
Page 47, the second sentence of the first paragraph should be reworded, it's not too clear. There's also an extra apostrophe in that sentence.

In the third from the last paragraph, "specialism" should be "specialty".

Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2014 12:49 am
by bowman
Page 51, there's an errant line break in the italicized text for Step Four: Create A Backstory.

Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2014 1:33 am
by Lionel de Lion
Investigator's Handbook: The descriptions for Strength, Constitution and Education of 0 aren't aligned correctly on page 46

Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2014 1:34 am
by Lionel de Lion
Investigator's Handbook: In the occupations section the entries for Smuggler (p.70), Pharmacist (p.86) and Zookeeper (p.92) have their credit rating range expressed as a class (e.g. "Lower Middle to Upper Middle class") rather than the numbers used for all other professions.

Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2014 1:35 am
by Stressed Chef
Investigators handbook: Page 11 image appears to be reversed ('Newport' poster text is backwards). Is this intentional?

Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2014 1:43 am
by bowman
Investigator's Handbook p. 69: "[Classic]" after Gangster's Moll shouldn't be bolded.

Re: Kickstarter Proof Reviews Here

Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2014 1:55 am
by bowman
Investigator's Handbook, Occupations chapter (and probably elsewhere): "x" is being used for "×".

Also, some entries are using hyphens in the Credir Rating ranges rather than en dashes.