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A longish short story

Posted: Mon Dec 09, 2013 11:50 am
by mrjohnmarchughes
I realise that the internet is saturated with more user-generated Lovecraftian fiction than a sensible person could ever want to read. I haven't allowed that fact to deter me from producing a story of my own.
I present a longish short story, called "The Visitors". If anyone should feel inclined to give it a read through, I'd very much appreciate some (gentle) comments.
I hope it gives a little pleasure to someone, somewhere.
http://www.4shared.com/office/5fJ53hu_/ ... itors.html

If there's a problem with the link or the file, will someone kindly let me know?

Re: A longish short story

Posted: Wed Dec 11, 2013 2:06 am
by hastur
quite good, i thought. a bit rough around a few edges here and there, but it satisfactorily leaves one with far more questions than answers. i'd certainly employ either Hillary myself; i can only imagine what sort of monstrosity Chaffinch has been made into.

thanks for posting it!