Hi,
This is a link to a draft for a short cthulhuesque story I've knocked up.
I would appreciate any comments or thoughts you have (Please be constructive, I'm a delicate flower!).
Any problems with the link please let me know.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/5khvhdvq0hvl4 ... s.pdf?dl=0
Ta
Ant
Just a short story draft
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Hi KeeperAnt.
I read your story, and I really liked it. I did do a little bit of format tweaking, and I did adjust some of the grammar to make your delivery a bit more direct. I have a my changed saved to a Word doc. Can you PM me your email address? I'd like to send this to you, if I may.
Thanks!
I read your story, and I really liked it. I did do a little bit of format tweaking, and I did adjust some of the grammar to make your delivery a bit more direct. I have a my changed saved to a Word doc. Can you PM me your email address? I'd like to send this to you, if I may.
Thanks!