Just a short story draft

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KeeperAntUK
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Just a short story draft

Post by KeeperAntUK » Fri Jul 10, 2015 11:53 am

Hi,

This is a link to a draft for a short cthulhuesque story I've knocked up.

I would appreciate any comments or thoughts you have (Please be constructive, I'm a delicate flower!).

Any problems with the link please let me know.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/5khvhdvq0hvl4 ... s.pdf?dl=0

Ta

Ant

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Re: Just a short story draft

Post by Keeper Jon » Fri Jul 10, 2015 4:41 pm

Hi KeeperAnt.

I read your story, and I really liked it. I did do a little bit of format tweaking, and I did adjust some of the grammar to make your delivery a bit more direct. I have a my changed saved to a Word doc. Can you PM me your email address? I'd like to send this to you, if I may.

Thanks!

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