So my first narration of a short story is online at sffaudio.com. It is called Out of the Storm and is by William Hope Hodgson. Please go and check it out over there. And I will be on the sffaudio show with Jesse Willis this coming Sunday, after we record, talking about the story.
Hopefully, this will start a string of narrations, I'm already working on another. Any criticism is taken without prejudice, as I have no clue what I am doing for the most part. Just remember, if you are too mean I will whip out the Tome of Infinite Banning and go to town. (not really)
Here is the link to the post at sffaudio
Keeper Murph's First Narration!
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KeeperMurph
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Nice job!
I would say you could've afforded to be just a tiny bit slower, at least at the start of the narration; The pace felt more natural to me at the end (Possibly because the story is reaching its climax).
I'm looking forward to hearing more stories! That was a nice 10 minutes, sitting with a cup of coffee, listening to a very Edgar Allan Poe'ish story
I would say you could've afforded to be just a tiny bit slower, at least at the start of the narration; The pace felt more natural to me at the end (Possibly because the story is reaching its climax).
I'm looking forward to hearing more stories! That was a nice 10 minutes, sitting with a cup of coffee, listening to a very Edgar Allan Poe'ish story
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Very nicely done, man. And congrats on getting such a cool gig. You get to talk about the story, too? That is all kinds of awesome.
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Thanks Barl0we. I was a bit rushed at the beginning now that I re-listen to it. I appreciate the comment though!Barl0we wrote:Nice job!
I would say you could've afforded to be just a tiny bit slower, at least at the start of the narration; The pace felt more natural to me at the end (Possibly because the story is reaching its climax).
I'm looking forward to hearing more stories! That was a nice 10 minutes, sitting with a cup of coffee, listening to a very Edgar Allan Poe'ish story
Thanks man! I'm going to be doing another one here soon. I hope to have learned from my mistakes.Dr. Gerard wrote:Very nicely done, man. And congrats on getting such a cool gig. You get to talk about the story, too? That is all kinds of awesome.
