Main book -
P102 - the kipper/player examples are all spaced funny. The extra line between the sections seem to have been misplayed.
P103 - justification all screwed up between "be" and "remembered". "Round represent" should be "round must represent".
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- Thu Aug 21, 2014 1:14 am
- Forum: Call of Cthulhu 7th Edition Kickstarter Proof
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- Mon Aug 11, 2014 2:51 am
- Forum: Call of Cthulhu 7th Edition Kickstarter Proof
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I haven't finished reading the books yet, and I'll probably post more errors as I find them, but I wanted to point out something about the graphics - sometimes there are words on background graphics, and the words are unreadable because of how they are placed. There's not enough contrast between th...
- Sun Aug 10, 2014 10:01 pm
- Forum: Call of Cthulhu 7th Edition Kickstarter Proof
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Page 194 - Waite was, not is. Page 195- word "together" unnecessary. "Would-be" unnecessary. They're already frauds. "lasted until his death" not "lasts". Replace "currently uses" with "used". Replace "suffers" with "suffered" and "dies" with "died". Replace "abandons" with abandoned. Replace "has l...
- Sun Aug 10, 2014 8:10 pm
- Forum: Call of Cthulhu 7th Edition Kickstarter Proof
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Page 190 - "columnist and radio" should be "columnist, radio". Change "hitting vaudeville" to "entering" or "tackling". Page 191 - "from 1921 1924". Something is missing there. Page 192 - "1936 and at" should be "1936," Page 192 - "and by forcing" should be "and forcing". "grants women" should be "g...
- Sun Aug 10, 2014 6:29 pm
- Forum: Call of Cthulhu 7th Edition Kickstarter Proof
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Page 178 - "and sports" should be "sporting" Page 179 - "insure" should he "ensure". In every case of the parachute section. Page 180 - ".45 ACP'S" probably shouldn't have a capital S, but overall would probably be written better as ".45 ACP rounds" Page 181 - should Springfield be in single quotes?...
- Sun Aug 10, 2014 2:52 pm
- Forum: Call of Cthulhu 7th Edition Kickstarter Proof
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Page 175 -'"intend" should be "intended" Page 175 - under studebaker, "open" should be "open-top" to match the other entries. Page 175 - sentence starting "Larger vehicles" breaks style - none of the other sections mention why investigators would want it. Page 177 - replace "and some as" with "with ...
- Sun Aug 10, 2014 2:27 pm
- Forum: Call of Cthulhu 7th Edition Kickstarter Proof
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Page 171 - "determining the weapon" should be "identifying a weapon". Page 171 - "and compared" is unnecessary. Page 171 - missing comma after "disorder" Page 171 - "Good levels of care" - "levels of" unnecessary A little out of order note - I love some of the photographs included. I wish you had ko...
- Sun Aug 10, 2014 3:51 am
- Forum: Call of Cthulhu 7th Edition Kickstarter Proof
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Handbook, page 155 under automobile, the word "carry" is kind of messed up. Page 158/159 - one of them should be reversed so both pages are the same orientation. Page 162 - should be convicted of, not convicted for. Page 163 - The people listed really are more "popular outlaws" or even "populist out...
- Sat Aug 09, 2014 10:13 pm
- Forum: Call of Cthulhu 7th Edition Kickstarter Proof
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Merijeek about 19 hours ago This may seem like a silly question, but what kind of proofing are you looking for? I assume a control-f will find all the @@ - or maybe not seeing as I've actually bought books before that told me to see page XXX. But I don't think "hereon" is a word (p32), and in the st...
- Sat Aug 09, 2014 7:37 pm
- Forum: Call of Cthulhu 7th Edition Kickstarter Proof
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In the side-box on page 97 when discussing combined rolls, you state: "If he were to make two successive rolls, first against Mechanical Repair and then against Electrical Repair, his chance of succeeding both would be reduced to 1%." Of the four possible outcomes, only one is a success on both rol...